"Trailhead" A Short Story
removed due to changes, will post back soon
off to a good start.
are you saying this is all there is or ever will be?
Well done. Interesting character development. You might have spent just a little more time developing the woman's character. Something to give us hope that she really will improve her life would have added some flavor.
I look forward to seeing more from you.
It was a Short story for class. I have thought about continuing the story if there is enough interest. There is additional story cooking in my head, but the assignment was for a short story that could stand alone, so i had constraints based on the assignment.
If there is enough interest i would definitely be willing to continue the story.